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Before & after examples

All examples are samples using fictional people, created to show how Randy rewrites a resume. Any resemblance to real people is coincidental.

Sample · fictional person

Retail to Operations

Jordan Ellis, Store Supervisor → Operations Coordinator

Before
  • Worked at store for 5 years
  • Responsible for scheduling
  • Did inventory
  • Helped train new people
After
  • Supervised a team of 12 across 3 shifts; built weekly schedules covering 70+ hours of store operation
  • Ran monthly inventory counts and cut recount discrepancies by reconciling counts against receiving logs
  • Trained 9 new hires on POS, opening and closing procedures
  • Seeking Operations Coordinator role applying scheduling and inventory experience

Every number in the "after" version came from the (fictional) person's own answers. Randy never adds figures you didn't give.

Sample · fictional person

Registered Nurse

Priya Raman, RN — Med-Surg

Before
  • Nurse at hospital
  • Took care of patients
  • Charting
  • Precepted students
After
  • Registered Nurse on a 32-bed medical-surgical unit, caring for 5–6 patients per shift
  • Documented assessments and care plans in Epic; maintained complete charting each shift
  • Precepted 4 nursing students through clinical rotations
  • BLS and ACLS certified

Every number in the "after" version came from the (fictional) person's own answers. Randy never adds figures you didn't give.

Sample · fictional person

Recent Graduate

Sam Okafor, B.S. Business → Marketing Associate

Before
  • Graduated 2026
  • Marketing club member
  • Part time barista
  • Did a group project
After
  • B.S. Business Administration, Marketing concentration, 2026
  • Marketing Club social lead: planned content calendar for 3 campus events
  • Barista, 20 hrs/week while full-time student; trusted with opening shifts
  • Capstone: market-sizing study for a local coffee roaster, presented to owner

Every number in the "after" version came from the (fictional) person's own answers. Randy never adds figures you didn't give.

Sample · fictional person

Software Engineer

Alex Chen, Software Engineer II

Before
  • Wrote code in Python
  • Worked on APIs
  • Fixed bugs
  • On-call
After
  • Built and maintained Python/FastAPI services handling order intake for an internal fulfillment platform
  • Reduced p95 API latency from 900ms to 350ms by adding caching and query indexes
  • Owned on-call rotation one week per month; wrote 6 runbooks now used by the team
  • Mentored 2 junior engineers through code review

Every number in the "after" version came from the (fictional) person's own answers. Randy never adds figures you didn't give.

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